2011年11月28日 星期一

Journal Entry 20 - Putting It All Together


Indeed, after all these different categories that Mr. McCool taught us. It is about time to put every single piece together in order to finish the final work. At the beginning, I honestly thought that the process is unnecessary because why don’t we just write down the story and then hand it in as a normal assignment. However, when I followed Mr. McCool’s lessons, I found out that these processes are essential to me. In fact, I did not know what point of view means in the beginning of this assignment. After our teacher explained, I realized that I actually learned about it in local school. This is a significant tool for writing.
I hope everyone like the story I wrote. Nevertheless, I worried that my story will not be able to create the suspense atmosphere, which is not only the most important thing of my story, but also the most difficult elements to create. In order to make your readers want to read your story continuous is a hard task for the narrator. Therefore, I hope my story can have this effect successfully. In addition, I believe that the plot of the story is pretty good. It should be a story that combines suspense and ghost, which give the readers eerie feelings. That is also the key element that I want my readers to receive. When I reading my story to the class, I will put emotions and pauses as I read along. Emotions help the readers to get into the story’s environment, and the pauses can be a hint of something shocking is coming. Overall, I have confidence that this will be a good story.

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