When I was writing this persuasive essay,
there are a few things that I found difficult with. First, it is hard to
brainstorm the three major reasons why media violence has a negative effect on
society. For this part, I am emphasizing the “major” part, because most of us
already knew that the invention of media created equal amount of advantages and
disadvantages. Therefore, it is not simple to find the three major supporting
idea that can persuade the audiences. Second, finding the supporting details is
also another different part. For each example, they required detail references
from researchers or professors in universities or colleges. Moreover, your real
life example need to be reasonable, otherwise no one will be convinced by the
speaker. In addition, when I moved to opposing point of
view, my position changed a little bit, because everything has its two sides,
which are pros and cons. I deeply believe in my argument, because if I have
doubts on my point of view, then how can I be able to convince my audiences? In
fact, I haven’t found any flaws or holes in my speech, but I believe any tiny
mistakes could make the whole essay structures fall. So, I should check my article
a few more times before I present it to everyone.
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